Many thanks to my dear friend and writing buddy Dawn Benedict for creating this post for me to magpie while I’m away
Dawn Benedict and I need your help!
We have both joined the Bunker Battle. The challenge was to choose a word pair, and go up against another author, with a story written for those word pairs.
From the challenge instructions, “The prompt we’ve given is not one word but two. These emotions are similar and we’d like you to show each of them distinctly within the story. And to make it even more challenging, you cannot use the words or their synonyms.”
Please click each link, read both stories in that bracket, and vote on the one you think is the best example of the word pair. (You will vote 4 separate times) Authors’ names are redacted so that stories are judged solely on content.
Ready? Here we go!
Pining and Longing vs Guilt and Remorse
Voting ends on May 15, 2026. The winners of each bracket will have the opportunity to choose a new word pair and battle again.
Thank you for taking the time to read and vote!
Having read them all, I have to say there are some amazing pieces here!





I agree, my friend, there truly are some amazing pieces here...it's so hard to choose! 💞